Feb 2, 2018 07:43
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Russian term
Ваши абоненты не успеют досмотреть новое видео — как наши специалисты уже...
Russian to English
Marketing
Internet, e-Commerce
Всем привет!
Есть вот такое предложение рус-англ из рекламного видеоролика.
Ваши абоненты не успеют досмотреть новое видео — как наши специалисты уже перенесут их данные в новую систему!
Какой лучше оборот использовать при переводе, желательно, чтобы короче и идиоматичнее получилось.
Just as your subscribers are about to finish watching the new video, our specialists will have done the job of transferring their data to the new system.
Есть вот такое предложение рус-англ из рекламного видеоролика.
Ваши абоненты не успеют досмотреть новое видео — как наши специалисты уже перенесут их данные в новую систему!
Какой лучше оборот использовать при переводе, желательно, чтобы короче и идиоматичнее получилось.
Just as your subscribers are about to finish watching the new video, our specialists will have done the job of transferring their data to the new system.
Proposed translations
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subscribers are not even halfway through...
Your subscribers are (not even) halfway through the video, while their data winds up in the system (data base?).
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The Misha
: Except I think you meant "when".
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Yes, it's definitely "when'', not "while". Thanks, man. PS Needless to say, I enjoyed (as always) reading your comments on the other answers :)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Спасибо"
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Denis Putko
Russian Federation
Russian Federation
Native in Russian
Specializes in field
Russian Federation
15 years IT professional
Native in: Russian (Variant: Standard-Russia)
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English
Your subscribers are still watching the new video and their data is already at the new system!
Примерно так.
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Dmitry Zaikin
: Времена не соответствуют. IN the new system, но никак не AT.
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Вполне резонно, спасибо
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Vladyslav Golovaty
Ukraine
Ukraine
Native in Russian
&
English
Ukraine
a top-rank. native English-Ukrainian-Rus
Native in: English (Variant: US) 
, Ukrainian (Variant: Standard-Ukraine) 
, Russian
Works in: English to Ukrainian, Ukrainian to English, Russian to English, and 3 more.
Your subscribers will not finish watching a new video, as our experts have already ...
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The Misha
: This actally means they will not be able to finish watching the video BECAUSE our experts have already sucked them dry and need not bother with them any longer. Hehehe.
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you may replace the source ... with any guess of yours, si vous voulez
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Dmitry Zaikin
Uruguay
Uruguay
Native in Russian
Specializes in field
Uruguay
Your subtitles and video games expert!
Native in: Russian (Variant: Standard-Russia)
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English
Переверните предложение
Your subscribers' data will be transferred to the new system in less time than it takes them to watch this video.
Это же английский. Основное правило - если не уверен, меняй местами части предложения. Помогает в большинстве случаев (мне, по крайней мере).
Тут ведь основной уклон все равно на то, что данные будут оперативно перенесены в новую систему, а не на продолжительности просмотра видео.
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...in less time than it takes them to watch the new video.
Это же английский. Основное правило - если не уверен, меняй местами части предложения. Помогает в большинстве случаев (мне, по крайней мере).
Тут ведь основной уклон все равно на то, что данные будут оперативно перенесены в новую систему, а не на продолжительности просмотра видео.
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...in less time than it takes them to watch the new video.
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The Misha
: This is definitely a plausible (and grammatical, too!!!:))) option although it is by far not the best available. Hence, what really bugs me here is your confidence level. There's more ways than one to skin a cat, you know.
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The Misha, this isn't your 1st comment of the sort to my post. But you never give a better suggestion. My confidence level is based on the fact that I would have used this translation.
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Rachel Douglas
United States
United States
Native in English
Works in field
United States
Excellent English from Russian originals
Native in: English (Variants: British, Australian, US)
Works in: Russian to English
Related KudoZ points
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Before they have even finished watching...
"Before your subscribers have even finished watching a [the] new video, our tech staff will have transferred their data to the new system!"
Omitted "already" ("will already have") because it's too wordy already. Choice of which article depends on fuller context.
It all sounds strange to me, but not because of the language; I thought such processes were fully automated.
Omitted "already" ("will already have") because it's too wordy already. Choice of which article depends on fuller context.
It all sounds strange to me, but not because of the language; I thought such processes were fully automated.
Peer comment(s):
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The Misha
: You know, it would really be more fun if they made it more like a blind tasting. This way one would be able to see who "gets" it, and who doesn't - "nevziraya na lichnosti" so to speak:) Cheers, Rachel. Long time no hear.
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Thanks, Misha. Sometimes I wake up in the middle of the night and this seems like the place to go.
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DTSM
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Thank you.
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Frank Szmulowicz, Ph. D.
United States
United States
Native in English
United States
On time, on target, on budget.
Native in: English , Polish
Works in: Polish to English, English to Polish, Russian to Polish, and 1 more.
As soon as your subscribers have finished watching a new video, our technicians already have ...
Option:
No sooner have your subscribers finished watching a new vidoes than our technician already have transferred ...
No sooner have your subscribers finished watching a new vidoes than our technician already have transferred ...
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Turdimurod Rakhmanov
Kyrgyzstan
Kyrgyzstan
Works in field
Kyrgyzstan
Education, Legal, Technical & Medical
Native in: Uzbek (Variants: Tashkent, Ferghana valley, Samarkand-Bukhara, Khorezm) , Kirghiz
Works in: English to Uzbek, English to Kirghiz, English to Kazakh, and 26 more.
Related KudoZ points
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7
Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video...см. ниже
I would translate:
Ваши абоненты не успеют досмотреть новое видео — как наши специалисты уже перенесут их данные в новую систему!
Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to see the whole part of the new video, when (as soon as) their data have already been transfered to the new system
Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) their data have already been transfered to the new system
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by our new specialists
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<bn>Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) their data have already been transfered to the new system by our new specialists.
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Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) their data have already been transfered to the new system by our new specialists.
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OR:
Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) our specialists have already transferred their data to the new system.
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TYPO:
of the new video,
not of of
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Your subscribers will hardly(/barely/scarcely) be able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) our specialists transfer their data to the new system by that time.
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OR:
Our subscribers haven’t even had a chance to watch the rest of the new video before our specialists transfer the data to the system.
Ваши абоненты не успеют досмотреть новое видео — как наши специалисты уже перенесут их данные в новую систему!
Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to see the whole part of the new video, when (as soon as) their data have already been transfered to the new system
Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) their data have already been transfered to the new system
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by our new specialists
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<bn>Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) their data have already been transfered to the new system by our new specialists.
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Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) their data have already been transfered to the new system by our new specialists.
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OR:
Your subscribers are hardly(/barely/scarcely) able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) our specialists have already transferred their data to the new system.
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TYPO:
of the new video,
not of of
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Your subscribers will hardly(/barely/scarcely) be able to watch the rest of of the new video, when (as soon as) our specialists transfer their data to the new system by that time.
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OR:
Our subscribers haven’t even had a chance to watch the rest of the new video before our specialists transfer the data to the system.
Peer comment(s):
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The Misha
: And this means that the rest of that video is unwatchable WHEN/IF/BECAUSE our specialists did whatever it is they do. It makes no logical sense whatsoever. And, of course, it's a mistranslation, technically speaking.
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this doesn't mean "unwatchable", hardly means here "only a very short time before"
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