Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Chinese term or phrase:
多元化产业产（战）略格局
English translation:
diversified business structure
Added to glossary by
Huijun Suo
Jul 16, 2007 12:53
16 yrs ago
Chinese term
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Business & Legal Translator
Native in: English (Variants: US, Singaporean, UK) 
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多元化产业产略格局
Chinese to English
Bus/Financial
Manufacturing
XX拥有6个全资子公司，7个控股公司，15个参股公司，形成了以输变电，新材料，新能源三大产业为主，信息产业，国际贸易，国际成套承包工程为新的经济增长点的多元化产业产略格局。
This is a big chunk to digest, but my first problem is with the last part of the sentence.
This is a big chunk to digest, but my first problem is with the last part of the sentence.
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Jul 30, 2007 04:06: Huijun Suo Created KOG entry
Jul 30, 2007 13:10: Huijun Suo changed "Edited KOG entry" from "<a href="/profile/614331">Huijun Suo's</a> old entry - "多元化产业产略格局"" to ""diversified business structure""
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Huijun Suo
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diversified business structure
... forming a diversified business structure led by ... with ... as new growth points.
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orientalhorizon
: yes, "diversified" is a good word, not necessary to use "industry" or similar wording.
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Thank you, orientalhorizon! 产业产略 sounds a bit pompous.
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Jason Ma
: 其余部分是花哨的官腔，似乎没必要译出来，
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Thank you, Martin. 产业产略 might better be used in a State Council report:)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
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The strategic structure of multiple industries.
产略 is a typo for "strategy", "strategic". The strategic structure of multiple industries.
3 hrs
multi-industry strategy
multi-industry strategy
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Note added at 3 hrs (2007-07-16 16:18:08 GMT)
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multi-industry framework
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Note added at 3 hrs (2007-07-16 16:18:08 GMT)
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multi-industry framework
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...an industrially diversified strategic deployment...
XX has an industrially diversified strategic deployment with 6 wholly-owned ...
Stance or posture might also serve in place of "deployment".
Stance or posture might also serve in place of "deployment".
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wingedvampire
Native in Chinese
years of experience in commercial bank
Native in: Chinese 
Works in: English to Chinese, Chinese to English
diversified industrial landscape
landscape已经具备了strategic的重要性，后者可以省略，否则太罗索。
15 hrs
multi-element industry structure
multi-element industry structure
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Note added at 15 hrs (2007-07-17 04:53:00 GMT)
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GuangBo group also establish the medium to long-term program, which is to
build ※GuangBo§ as an international brand, positively develop the multi-element
industry structure in terms of Nanometre material, digital camera and smart
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Note added at 15 hrs (2007-07-17 04:53:00 GMT)
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GuangBo group also establish the medium to long-term program, which is to
build ※GuangBo§ as an international brand, positively develop the multi-element
industry structure in terms of Nanometre material, digital camera and smart
1 day 18 hrs
LoyalTrans
Native in Chinese
Legal/Finance translator, 9 years exp
Native in: Chinese
Works in: English to Chinese, Chinese to English
Related KudoZ points
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diversified industry and strategy deployment
I think "产略" should be a typo for "战略".
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