May 11, 2008 14:12
16 yrs ago
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English term

multiple and severe long term problems

English Social Sciences Linguistics
Is it possible to have these two adjectives linked by "and" or should we use a comma?

I'm editing the abstract of a paper for an English scientific magazine. It's about poor families and the problems they face in their daily lives.

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yes

IMHO it is OK to use "and" between these two adjectives

multiple and severe long term problems
Peer comment(s):

agree Carol Gullidge : yes it is. You have the choice, but linking it like this is more emphatic. Also, I'm pretty sure you should hyphenate long-term - but see under "hyphens" in the guardian style guide http://www.guardian.co.uk/styleguide/page/0,,184838,00.html
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agree Maria Castro : yes. I agree with Carol when she says "and" emphasizes the idea
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agree Armorel Young : yes, this flows best to me - and I the hyphen in long-term is essential
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agree Patricia Townshend (X)
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agree ael
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agree JaneTranslates : I can't improve on your answer or Carol's comment.
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agree Egil Presttun
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agree Vicky Nash : Definitely with the hyphen
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agree Phong Le
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multiple severe long-term problems

I would prefer this one.
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multiple and severe, long-term problems

no comma required if 'and' is used, but a comma should separate the other two adjectives as they constitute a small list, "severe, long-term problems".
Or, "multiple, severe and long-term problems" or even "multiple, severe, long-term problems"
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agree julzav : agree
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multiple and severe problems(,) in the long run

as in: "we are facing/expecting multiple and severe problems(,) in the long run"
or: “in the long run, we are facing/expecting multiple and severe problems”

I am counting 3 (rather than 2) adjectives or attributes, and I would say that your exact phrasing (and punctuation) depends on the point you wish to make. If the "long-term" aspect refers to both multiple and severe, I would tend to indicate this using the adverb form like in the above.
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multiple and severe long term problems

we use the comma if we want to list things in a series. we put and before the last thing to me mentioned in a series but since it is two parts adjective, it is better to use and without a comma
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