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Jul 27, 2009 20:58
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German term
Pflegeplätze
German to English
Medical
Medical: Health Care
senior care
For a translation of a TV spot comprised of pithy slogans and phrases positively describing an Austrian community (the phrases must be just as concise and trendy).
This specific phrase: MEHR ALS 2000 SENIOREN-PFLEGEPLÄTZE
So far I've come up with:
"MORE THAN 2000 SENIOR CARE PLACEMENT OPTIONS", but that is just not it.
'Places' and 'spots' and 'positions' don't do it either.
Anybody else care to weigh in?
It's also an urgent, overnight project, so I'm looking for something FAST.
Thanks in advance,
Beth in Salzburg
This specific phrase: MEHR ALS 2000 SENIOREN-PFLEGEPLÄTZE
So far I've come up with:
"MORE THAN 2000 SENIOR CARE PLACEMENT OPTIONS", but that is just not it.
'Places' and 'spots' and 'positions' don't do it either.
Anybody else care to weigh in?
It's also an urgent, overnight project, so I'm looking for something FAST.
Thanks in advance,
Beth in Salzburg
Proposed translations
(English)
3 +2 | accommodation/care places | Armorel Young |
3 +1 | places in sheltered accommodation/residential care | Anne-Marie Grant (X) |
4 | residential care [bed] capacity | Lirka |
4 | Over 2000 nursing home and assisted living options available for senior citizens | Holly Hart |
3 | senior care units | Audrey Foster (X) |
1 -1 | caring places | Christine Bollmann |
Change log
Aug 1, 2009 13:41: Steffen Walter changed "Term asked" from "pflegeplätze" to "Pflegeplätze"
Proposed translations
+2
22 mins
accommodation/care places
You don't really give enough context - just what sort of community is this, and what sort of care is provided?
However, possible options might be:-
Accommodation with care provided for more than 2000 senior citizens (or whatever word you are using for Senioren)
Care places for more than ...
If it were a nursing home setup you would say:-
More than 2000 beds ... but I don't think that's what you're after here.
However, possible options might be:-
Accommodation with care provided for more than 2000 senior citizens (or whatever word you are using for Senioren)
Care places for more than ...
If it were a nursing home setup you would say:-
More than 2000 beds ... but I don't think that's what you're after here.
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Helen Shiner
: though certainly not with 'seniors' which sounds awful (I know you're not suggesting it yourself, Armorel)
5 mins
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I completely agree with you!
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agree |
Anne-Marie Grant (X)
49 mins
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-1
24 mins
caring places
some slogans:
we take care of more than 2000 seniors.
more than 2000 seniors will appreciate our care.
this is more "hippie-style":
More than 2000 senios will be happy that we care for them.
The happiness of more than 2000 seniors will be assured by our caring staff. (was just about to write stuff ;_DD)
we take care of more than 2000 seniors.
more than 2000 seniors will appreciate our care.
this is more "hippie-style":
More than 2000 senios will be happy that we care for them.
The happiness of more than 2000 seniors will be assured by our caring staff. (was just about to write stuff ;_DD)
Peer comment(s):
neutral |
Armorel Young
: staff can be caring, but places can't be - caring is a human attribute
10 mins
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disagree |
Lancashireman
: Wrong for the reason stated above.
2 hrs
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+1
43 mins
places in sheltered accommodation/residential care
More than 2000 places in sheltered accommodation or residential care for our older citizens / for the elderly.
Sheltered accommodation = independent living but warden controlled
Residential care = group home with care staff.
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Note added at 1 hr (2009-07-27 22:11:57 GMT)
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Though admittedly this is more of an explanation than a slogan...
Sheltered accommodation = independent living but warden controlled
Residential care = group home with care staff.
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Note added at 1 hr (2009-07-27 22:11:57 GMT)
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Though admittedly this is more of an explanation than a slogan...
1 hr
residential care [bed] capacity
http://www.northernhealth.ca/News_Events/Media_Centre_and_Ne...
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Note added at 1 hr (2009-07-27 22:52:04 GMT)
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If it's indeed a hospital facility, then I'd definitely go with bed capacities...
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Note added at 1 hr (2009-07-27 22:52:04 GMT)
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If it's indeed a hospital facility, then I'd definitely go with bed capacities...
Note from asker:
Sorry, I don't agree, because this phrase concerns a city-wide, varied spectrum of facilities and elderly care services, not just one building. I guess I haven't made it clear enough: all of the TV ad's phrases are representative for the *city*, which is advertising its advantages in the spot; this phrase is not about a specific, single facility.... Hope that helps clarify. |
3 hrs
Over 2000 nursing home and assisted living options available for senior citizens
'Pflege' implies some degree of nursing care but I suppose it could also include 'assisted living' options which are a step above 'nursing homes' when the individual is still able to do things himself but doesn't want to live completely alone in a house by himself. Do use the word 'senior citizen' since that is a buzz word that fits well in your marketing blurb (So does 'assisted living options')
Peer comment(s):
neutral |
Armorel Young
: not "options" - that implies that there are 2000 different things to choose from ("5 meal options" = 5 different meals, not 5 copies of the same meal), and "available" is superfluous, but otherwise the phrase is good
7 hrs
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7 hrs
German term (edited):
Senioren-Pflegeplätze
senior care units
Please google for "senior care units".
Discussion
BJ in Salzburg
I've consulted the client -- they've provided the background photo for this phrase: an out-of-focus, 5-story, hospital-like structure. So we're definitely on-target, imo.
e.g. Accommodation and care for more than 2000 senior citizens
After tweaking it some more, I've come up with this instead:
ELDER CARE FACILITIES FOR MORE THAN 2000 SENIOR CITIZENS
Comments, critiques?
BJ