Apr 27, 2010 13:32
14 yrs ago
Dutch term
SAMEN FEESTEN, SAMEN RELAXEN
Dutch to English
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Slogan for an event company who organise themed trips to France. I need a catchy phrase in English :-)
Proposed translations
(English)
4 +4 | Have fun and unwind together | Talitha Wilsnagh |
3 +2 | Let's party, let's chill | Christine Gardner |
3 +1 | party together, chill together | vixen |
Change log
Apr 27, 2010 13:52: vixen changed "Language pair" from "English to Dutch" to "Dutch to English"
Proposed translations
+4
1 hr
Selected
Have fun and unwind together
Sounds like fun when you read it.
Peer comment(s):
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Annabel Rautenbach
28 mins
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Thank you, Annabel
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agree |
Tina Vonhof (X)
: Given the additional context provided re the age group (30-50) and the target audience (a hotel), I think this is most appropriate.
3 hrs
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Thank you, Tina
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agree |
Iris Shalev
: They all sound good, but given the age group, like Tina said, this would be the most fitting here I think
14 hrs
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Thank you, Iris
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agree |
Bryan Crumpler
: Perhaps not the catchiest, but it's appropriate... I miss some duality however, thinking about any additional nuance the repetition of "samen" might hold or what "samen" means ("2" b-days together wrt together w/ "many" friends)
1 day 19 mins
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Thank you, Bryan. I tried for duality, but it didn't sound right. I liked your idea, though.
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
+1
19 mins
party together, chill together
Een schot voor de boeg.
Ik zal ook het talenpaar even veranderen. ;-)
Ik zal ook het talenpaar even veranderen. ;-)
+2
1 hr
Let's party, let's chill
An alternative
Peer comment(s):
agree |
Elma de Jong
45 mins
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agree |
Lianne van de Ven
: It's chillax (=chill and relax) these days
50 mins
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Discussion
The target audience is a group of people between 30-50 years old who go on a ''themed'' trip to France to celebrate the birthday of two members of that group.
The program is currently in Dutch and needs to be send to the hotel they will be staying at so they know what happens on which day.
Hope that gives you a little more info! Thanks for your trouble.
You need something specific to their target audience and market.
To whom do they sell these themed trips to?
What kind of history/image does the company currently have and what direction have they taken in their marketing/advertising up until this point?
Does your slogan provide value, in the sense of it having enough of a story or enough facades that will represent them on many different levels throughout their marketing campaign?
What is the target market? US tourists? UK tourists? RSA? IN? IE? AU? CA?
My guess is they are not students, and would more likely be 40 plussers (better yet, senior citizens) going on group holiday tours. Students don't usually buy into these "themed" international trips.