English term
United States
Best style, excellent creative writer
Native in: Spanish 
Works in: English to Spanish, Portuguese to Spanish
our care
NO le encuentro una vuelta natural en español. Es para una traducción oral, por así decirlo.
He aquí la frase completa:
"we want you to know that it was a privilege to be entrusted with the care of your child and we extend our care and our concern to each of you as your lives continue"
Es la parte de "we extend our care" la que no me sale...
Ya que estamos, la resolución de la parte que dice "as your lives continue", tampoco me sale natural.
Quisiera algo que suene bien, natural y, por supuesto, correcto, para el audio que le voy a agregar al video.
Muchas gracias por su ayuda.
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Proposed translations
nuestra atención
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Note added at 27 mins (2015-12-15 03:12:56 GMT)
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... pues sus vidas continúan...
O "... pues no podemos ignorar que son ustedes los que siguen viviendo"...
... pues la vida continúa
... pues uds. siguen viviendo la vida...
Creo que puede haber muchas opciones válidas.
Saludos.
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Mónica Algazi
: Solo puse una posible versión alternativa.
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Muchas gracias, Mónica. :-)
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Marcelo González
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Muchas gracias, Marcelo. :-)
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Mexico
Confianza, certeza, creatividad.
Native in: Spanish (Variant: Mexican)
Works in: English to Spanish, Italian to Spanish, French to Spanish, and 6 more.
nuestro cuidado. . .
Spain
EN>SP, CAT
Native in: Catalan 
, Spanish
Works in: English to Catalan, English to Spanish, Spanish to Catalan, and 1 more.
os cuidaremos y nos preocuparemos por vosotros
Uruguay
ATA-certified English-Spanish translator
Native in: Spanish (Variant: Latin American)
Works in: English to Spanish
los atenderemos/nuestra atención
Queremos que sepan que fue para nosotros un privilegio que nos confiaron la atención de su hijo, y que, de ahora en más, dedicaremos nuestra atención y nuestros desvelos a cada uno de ustedes/los atenderemos y nos preocuparemos por cada uno de ustedes a lo largo de su vida.
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Beatriz Ramírez de Haro
: Muy bien
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Gracias, Beatriz. Saludos. : )
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Marcelo González
10 hrs
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Gracias, Marcelo. Saludos. : )
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United Kingdom
Translate well and prosper
Native in: Spanish (Variant: Standard-Spain)
Works in: English to Spanish
ofrecemos nuestros cuidados y apoyo para cada uno de vosotros continuamente
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Note added at 10 hrs (2015-12-15 13:45:01 GMT)
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Como va dirigido a los padres de los ninos fallecidos igual mejor poner el verbo en futuro "ofreceremos" "extenderemos"
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