Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

Past Perfect with Before

English answer:

... before all the sales staff had arrived

Added to glossary by B D Finch
Mar 29, 2016 08:52
8 yrs ago
English term

Past Perfect with Before

Non-PRO English Other Linguistics Grammar Issues
There is a sentence in Personal Study Book for Business Benchmark by Guy Brook-Hart (page 23):

6. The meeting started before all the sales staff ................ (arrive).

There are two options given in the key to this exercise: had arrived/arrived.

While there is no argument concerning the Simple Past, I find it difficult to explain the use of Past Perfect in this context. I would be more at ease to say The meeting had started before all the staff arrived....
Change log

Mar 29, 2016 09:20: Steffen Walter changed "Field (specific)" from "Other" to "Linguistics"

Apr 5, 2016 08:32: B D Finch Created KOG entry

Discussion

Christine Andersen Mar 29, 2016:
Imperfect is used for a regular occurrence While I am no grammarian either, I agree entirely with Jack.

Past perfect is used for a specific occasion.
The staff arrived every day - or regularly, and a meeting might be held before they normally arrived.

This is a specific meeting, which started before some staff had arrived (on that particular occasion).

Responses

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... before all the sales staff had arrived

The meeting started before all the sales staff ................ (arrive).

There are two options given in the key to this exercise: had arrived/arrived.

The past perfect is used here both to show the order of occurrence of two past events, and to indicate that all the sales staff did, indeed, arrive subsequently. The sentence is constructed in a way that puts the emphasis on the organisation of the meeting, which was not delayed to wait for the sales staff. This construction would be used e.g. if one wanted to criticise the organisers of the meeting for not waiting.

You suggest an alternative: "The meeting had started before all the [sales] staff arrived." This puts the emphasis on the staff who missed the beginning of the meeting and would be used e.g. if the sales staff were being criticised for their lateness.
Peer comment(s):

agree Sheila Wilson : A good example of how emphasis shifts in two equally correct sentences
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had arrived

The meeting started before all the staff had arrived. I'm not a grammarian, haven't had a lesson in English grammar since 1950, but I'm sure it should be Past Perfect here.
Peer comment(s):

agree Christine Andersen
47 mins
Thank you.
agree Edith Kelly
56 mins
Thank you.
agree Yasutomo Kanazawa
2 hrs
Тhank you.
agree Tina Vonhof (X)
5 hrs
Thank you.
agree acetran
1 day 1 hr
Thank you.
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