Jan 18, 2021 00:23
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English term

belly-grin

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature Historical detective novel set in New York in 1702.
The enigmatic swordsman, Count Anton Mannerheim Dahlgren, who'd so nearly slashed Matthew a ***belly-grin*** with the point of a dagger. (This sentence refers to the previous book of the series, in which the fight is described as follows:

"As Matthew fought for his life, he had one thing in mind.
Something Hudson Greathouse had said.
You’ll someday cross swords with a villain who’ll long to get a short blade in your belly. You’ll know him, when the time comes.
Matthew knew him.
He saw Dahlgren’s left hand go under the waistcoat. He grabbed at the wrist to trap it, but another blow from the hilt rattled his brains. Where was Dahlgren’s hand? Panic flared in him. Where was-
Suddenly Dahlgren’s hand emerged. It had six fingers, one formed of steel and deadly sharp.
With a whuff of air and a burst of demonic strength, the Count drove his hidden dagger squarely into Matthew’s stomach.
There was a sudden loud crack. No more, no less.
Dahlgren screamed like a woman. He fell back, the dagger dangling and then dropping from the hand that hung off a broken wrist. His rapier also clattered to the floor. His eyes were wide with shock, and perhaps they widened even farther when Matthew reached under his own waistcoat and pulled out the silver fruit tray-about the size of an open hand-that he’d slid down to protect his belly from the dagger attack that Greathouse had warned him in the wisdom of experience to anticipate.
One thing could be said about Dahlgren, Matthew thought. The man certainly kept his thumb locked down.")
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slash across the belly that looked like a grin/smile

I would say in your context

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Note added at 3 hrs (2021-01-18 04:14:15 GMT)
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picture it

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Note added at 4 hrs (2021-01-18 04:40:52 GMT)
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I certainly can and not a pleasant prospect
Peer comment(s):

agree philgoddard : That's a 5.
1 hr
agree Shilpa Baliga
2 hrs
agree Sheila Wilson
5 hrs
agree Yvonne Gallagher : of course
7 hrs
agree Jessica Rees
12 hrs
ty all
agree BdiL
1 day 6 hrs
ty all
agree Daryo
2 days 17 hrs
ty all
agree Seamus O Donnell : agree
10 days
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16 hrs

Glasgow Smile

This is just a suggestion. There is a gruesome practice that used to happen between football hooligans in England, particularly with Chelsea and Glasgow fans, wherein the perpetrator slashes the opposing fan from one corner of the face to the other, so as to create an extended grin/smile across the mouth. I've listed a link below. Thought it would give you some creative ideas.
Example sentence:

He slashed his belly as if to give him a Glasgow smile.

Peer comment(s):

neutral Daryo : there is also a "Glasgow kiss" // but it won't work here: New York in 1702
2 days 4 hrs
neutral Sarah Maidstone : I feel compelled to point out that Glasgow has never been in England.
6 days
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