Nov 9, 2021 09:18
2 yrs ago
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Spanish term

y le sonrió como muestra de agradecimiento...

Spanish to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature Literature.
I would like to know the best translation of this phrase from Latin American Spanish into American English. Translator colleagues from Spain, feel free to send me your suggestions as well. This is a translation about Mythology.

It's about the story of The Pandora Box" Is okay to translate it as and she smiled to her to show her gratefulness?

Here is the full paragraph:

Epimeteo que escuchó su llanto se acercó y Pandora abrió la caja para mostrarle que estaba vacía. Sin embargo, antes de que la cerrara de nuevo, un pequeño insecto se escapó volando de ella, miró a Pandora y le sonrió como muestra de agradecimiento al haberle dejado en libertad.
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Non-PRO (2): philgoddard, María Perales

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Discussion

yugoslavia (asker) Nov 10, 2021:
Thanks Thanks for your suggestion Lisa.
Lisa Rosengard Nov 9, 2021:
I think it says that the box was finally empty while a fly flew away happily, smiling in gratitude about its freedom.

Proposed translations

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and smiled at her as a token of gratitude...

Collins:

as a token of friendship como prueba de amistad
Note from asker:
Thanks Miss Taylor.
Peer comment(s):

agree Andrew Bramhall : Yep, ' as a token of HIS gratitude';
1 hr
That is true! I thought there was something missing! Thank you!
agree Francois Boye : agree with Oliver
3 hrs
agree philgoddard : I don't think you smile "in token of" anything, though. That makes it sound like some sort of reward. Just "smiled at her in gratitude" would do.
4 hrs
as a token (of something) symbolic of something, especially of gratitude; as a memento of something. He gave me a rose as a token of his esteem. Here, take this gift as a token of my appreciation. See also: token.
agree Avril Shirley : I agree with Phil's comment - "smiled at her in gratitude" is sufficient. Cheers.
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks a lot."
5 hrs

and smiled at her to show his gratitude

my suggestion
Note from asker:
Thanks Miss Peters.
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