Apr 27, 2004 13:15
20 yrs ago
German term
Lecturer: University - College
Works in: English to German, German to English, Spanish to German, and 1 more.
slogan
German to English
Marketing
Marketing / Market Research
Hi everybody,
I am smoking too many cigarettes trying to come up with an English version of this slogan that does not sound too lame. Any creative input highly appreciated.Thanks.
Gemeinsam strategisch handeln - das Richtige besser machen
I am smoking too many cigarettes trying to come up with an English version of this slogan that does not sound too lame. Any creative input highly appreciated.Thanks.
Gemeinsam strategisch handeln - das Richtige besser machen
Proposed translations
(English)
Proposed translations
+2
3 mins
Selected
A joint strategy to take us one step further
A very loose, all-purpose version would be: "A joint strategy to take us one step further".
Perhaps you should tell us what it's for.
Perhaps you should tell us what it's for.
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
writeaway
: context? you need context? c'mon Ian, where's your sense of adventure.....
5 mins
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| agree |
Jennifer Hottarek
: sounds good
2 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thanks to everyone for the wealth of ideas - Ian`s version is just too seductive to decline."
11 mins
Joint strategic action for the best of results
or
Joint strategic action for optimum outcome
Joint strategic action for optimum outcome
13 mins
Lydia Molea
Germany
Germany
Native in German
Works in field
Germany
Quality - Professionalism - Reliability
Native in: German
Works in: English to German, German to English, Spanish to German, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
4
One (common) strategy - to do the right thing and do it better!
Just an attempt ... maybe even let's do the right thing and do it better
+1
5 mins
Nicole Tata
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in German
&
English
Specializes in field
United Kingdom
Transcreation, Marketing/PR, Literary
Native in: English 
, German
Works in: English to German, German to English
Related KudoZ points
:
24
Better results through a common strategy
off the top of my head
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Note added at 6 mins (2004-04-27 13:21:59 GMT)
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a common strategy for success
working together for long-term success
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Note added at 14 mins (2004-04-27 13:29:46 GMT)
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A common strategy for an even better future
Pooling our creative energy (resources) for an even better future
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Note added at 6 mins (2004-04-27 13:21:59 GMT)
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a common strategy for success
working together for long-term success
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Note added at 14 mins (2004-04-27 13:29:46 GMT)
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A common strategy for an even better future
Pooling our creative energy (resources) for an even better future
+1
20 mins
Strategic teamwork - the better way to the right result
assuming that "handeln" here is just 'to act'
27 mins
strategic cooperation - improving on the best
another idea
29 mins
David Hollywood
Native in English
Works in field
worked for int. orgs (IMF, OAS, IDB)
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, German to English
Related KudoZ points
:
75
Pool strategy and go one better than best!
might work here .... (I took a "little" poetic license with "das Richtige" but if it's "the right thing" you want to do your "best" :)
30 mins
In unity is strength
Just a thought!!!!
+1
44 mins
Strategize together — do the right thing better
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Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Terry Gilman
: given the multiple methods, perhaps "things" ? I like the syncopation
2 hrs
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