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33rd translation contest: "Back to the playground" » English to Portuguese (BR)

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Source text in English

[...] “I have a proposal.” It leaned forward like my friend April does when she wants to tell a secret, even though none of her secrets are any good. Or even really secrets. “If you don’t tell anyone I am here, I can fix your eyes.”
“Get out of town!”
It blinked a couple of times. “That is what I am attempting to do.”
“What I mean is you can’t do that!”
“Why not?”
“Well, no one else has been able to fix my eyes, besides with glasses.”
“I have certain abilities. You will see, provided…”
“…I don’t tell anyone about you?”
“That is the heart of it, that is the nub.”
“How do I know you won’t blind me? You could be like one of those telemarketers making promises but totally lying.”
It started waxing on, waxing off again. “I would not do such a thing to a creature who has done me no harm.”
“Meaning if I harmed you, you could make me go blind?”
“That’s on a need-to-know basis.”
“And if you fix my eyes, and I don’t tell anyone about you, you’ll leave our fields?”
“That’s the heart of it!” [...]

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Entry #37732 — Discuss 0
Winner
Voting points1st2nd3rd
225 x402 x1
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Other
This trans​lation is ​the only o​ne that us​ed the rep​orted spee​ch correct​ly through​out the te​xt. "O tra​vessão é u​m sinal de​ pontuação​ cuja fina​lidade é i​ndicar o d​iscurso di​reto ou en​fatizar (d​estacar) t​rechos de ​textos."
Link: https://ww​w.portugue​s.com.br/g​ramatica/t​ravessao.h​tml
Oliver Simões
Other
This trans​​lation is​ ​the only​ o​ne that​ us​ed the​ rep​orted​ spee​ch c​orrect​ly ​through​ou​t the te​x​t. "O tra​​vessão é u​​m sinal d​e​ pontuaç​ão​ cuja f​ina​lidade​ é i​ndica​r o d​iscu​rso di​ret​o ou en​fa​tizar (d​e​stacar) t​​rechos de ​​textos."
Link: https://ww​w.portugue​s.com.br/g​ramatica/t​ravessao.h​tml
Oliver Simões
Other
This trans​lation is ​the only o​ne that us​ed the rep​orted spee​ch correct​ly through​out the te​xt. "O tra​vessão é u​m sinal de​ pontuação​ cuja fina​lidade é i​ndicar o d​iscurso di​reto ou en​fatizar (d​estacar) t​rechos de ​textos."
Link: https://ww​w.portugue​s.com.br/g​ramatica/t​ravessao.h​tml
Oliver Simões
Entry #38071 — Discuss 0
Voting points1st2nd3rd
193 x43 x21 x1
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Entry #37922 — Discuss 0
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122 x41 x22 x1
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Entry #38128 — Discuss 0
ANA SANTANNA
ANA SANTANNA
United States
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112 x41 x21 x1
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Entry #38210 — Discuss 0
Voting points1st2nd3rd
71 x41 x21 x1
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Entry #37879 — Discuss 0
Jan Saar
Jan Saar
Brazil
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602 x22 x1
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Entry #37778 — Discuss 0
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41 x400
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Entry #37924 — Discuss 0
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201 x20
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Entry #38189 — Discuss 0
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0000
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